The hot air balloon

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then
we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is that the picture helped me with my ideas.

I need to improve on not always starting my sentences with 'I saw'. We also made a google draw showing the things that we would
take with us in on the balloon.

I was driving to the race and suddenly we stopped at the

race and we quickly jumped outside and then we got in the
hot air balloon. I got up high in the air.
I saw lots of countries. I looked down  to the ground and then
I saw lots of people. I saw lots of birds below me.
I saw lots of people on the ground. I felt scared in the sky and
excited.I saw lots of tiny blocks on the ground.
I saw planes. I had packed a sleeping bag  
 I packed lots of lunch ,my water bottle ,my clothes .
I was frightened. I jumped out of my hot air balloon.
I landed on the ground.

The End.